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[Anonymous]

This is a new business venture I've started up in the last few months, and it's going really well, I just wanted to gather others opinions on the site itself.

Please be honest, I can take criticism!

Thanks
Michele


http://www.thelovejar.com

[Lori]

Hi Michele,

Tried to look but the site isn't up.

Lori

[Anonymous]

How could the site not be up? It's working for me...shouldn't be a browser issue either, and my ISP confirms the site availability.

[Anonymous]

I love it. And I am jealous - I didn't think of it. about 5 years ago, we did Memory Jars for our mom's for mother's day. You might want to add that too. Of course it would have to be custom. But, we filled the jar with all kinds of our happy and funny childhood memories.

Best of luck to you. I would love to link to your site from mine. email me at bolandemail@earthlink.net

[Anonymous]

Honest answer: the concept and the name are very cute but the pictures could be more colorful and appealing. You have to catch the customer's attention right away!

1 typo It reads "Why now SHOW..."
It should read "Why not SHOW"

Now for the human touch, I think you have a wonderful idea and product and marketing is soooo very important. Maybe if you had a way to add a little warm and fuzzy feeling, sales might even be better. Instead of black letters and white background, try softer tones.

My deepest apologies if you are offended in anyway but I thought constructive criticism is always good and that is how I meant it. I am in sales and marketing and wanted to help you. I wish you all the success in the world!!!

[Anonymous]

Don't apologize for criticism, I can take it! It only serves to make my site better.

That being said, I will be changing the color scheme of the main site tonight, when I add the valentines line of jars. Red and white will definitely jump out at you on the page!

And I can't believe I had a typo in there! Those hardly ever get past me. Thanks!

Michele

[24hourwealth]

Hi,

I would put at the top of the page half of the page is blank and you have all the links half way down. Other than that pretty good.

Good luck!
Jeff Casmer