Party Directory Logo

[HerOverMe]

My finished logo:
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL254/1944567/9389885/133744297.jpg

Smaller version w/ color for site header:
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL254/1944567/9389885/133744295.jpg

oh - and i had to save them as .jpg instead of .png to get them on here - so everything white is actually transparent. :)

And an actual photo of the Nashville skyline for reference:
http://www.discountretailersdirectory.com/Nashville-Skyline.jpg

[justinpowell]

Ashlee:

Overall, I really like the logo! A few thoughts:

- As an alternative, I might suggest having the balloons appear from behind the buildings instead of attached to your company name; this would tie them into the town concept more.

- When I first glanced at it, it wasn't obvious to me that the silhouettes represented buildings until I read your name. As an alternative, might suggest using white outlines around the smaller buildings in the foreground so they're not as lost in the image.

- This is totally nitpicky (please don't shoot me ;-) ) and certainly a function of how the images were compressed in JPEG, but for your final-final I'd try to make sure you don't have any of the compression jaggies as they take away from the crispness of your logo. It probably won't be an issue in the PNG, but just so you're aware.

Otherwise, great job!!

[HerOverMe]

I made a few changes:
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL254/1944567/9389885/135112998.jpg

[justinpowell]

Very cool! I like it a lot!!

[instyledesign]

Hi Ashlee,

I would like to add a little nickypicky. If you were able to change your border into something slightly more playfull like the O in your name or the line of your balloon, the concept would be even stronger.

Success,

Yvette Sonneveld
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