Please Review My Website!

[aunicorn]

Please Review My Website!

It is an affiliates shopping website that sends leads to a complex of national and international web shopping locations that use U.S. dollars, Euros, english pounds, etc.

But initially, it presents an entertaining tutorial about 3D Optical Magic.

Pictures jump right out of your computer screen.

Please visit and give NEGATIVE comments about how to improve the site!

http://www.dcnet2000.com/~neural/aunicorn/OpticalMagic/

Thank you

[Audrey]

Here's my thoughts; I opened the link and the first thing that jumped out at me were the google ads. They are white on the black background and so those ads are the first thing your visitor notices.

I slowly scanned the entire page and after scanning it am not sure what you're offering.

Those were my two initial reactions to the site. I hope this is what you're looking for in the way of a review.

[aunicorn]

Here's my thoughts; I opened the link and the first thing that jumped out at me were the google ads. They are white on the black background and so those ads are the first thing your visitor notices.

I slowly scanned the entire page and after scanning it am not sure what you're offering.

Those were my two initial reactions to the site. I hope this is what you're looking for in the way of a review.
I have reworked the site and put an explanation of what the site is offering at the first of the site. To be successful, an affiliate site of this sort must provide shopping variety and it must be international. Which breaks the general rule that a site should sell just one thing, and sell it well.

Your criticism was very helpful and I solicit others to join in please.

[Audrey]

Much better with the ads gone from the top. Ok...let me ask a few questions:

1. how are folks landing on your site?
2. what specifically do you offer? It appears you offer 4 things, but all on one page?

[aunicorn]

Much better with the ads gone from the top. Ok...let me ask a few questions:

1. how are folks landing on your site?
2. what specifically do you offer? It appears you offer 4 things, but all on one page?
Our sitemap is very simple with only a few sub pages!
So navigating this website is best by scroll and click.
Our visitors are very diverse and from all over the world and unpredictable.

SiteMap Sub Pages:

Optical Comparisons
Birding Korner
Comments
Reciprocal Links: A network of friends!
Links and Search Engines

The Top of the site now reads:

This site has what you are looking for
because it has a wide variety of things you can choose from!

FREE THINGS!

1. Entertainment: Click on our fairy and alien sublinks with your sound turned up.

2. Information: Everything you were afraid to ask about 3D vision.

3. Tutorial: On exciting web design using your new knowledge of vision.

COMPARISON SHOPPING
(Get the cheapest price for the exact same item at different shops)

4. International shopping: At some of best web shopping malls and boutiques.
(with which we are affiliated)

Also, I decided that the site looked to garish, so I changed to Font from crazy legs to plain Arial.

Your criticism, as usual has been very useful!

To understand this site one must grasp the idea of holding several shops in the "netshops Mall" open, simultaneosly, and quickly switching between them with the the systems bar to compare prices.