Please see my first published article

[PowerMallWorks]

I posted this in another thread but it is more appropriate here. For you experienced writers, please give me some constructive feedback.
www.associatedcontent.com/article/272754/how_to_determine_if_a_workathome_business.html

If you want to write articles for a few bucks then you can join here. I think I can get credit for referring you!
http://www.associatedcontent.com/join.html?refer=63313

[judilynn]

I write for AC also. Great article. I put you in my favorites.

[smbwallace]

Congratulations on being published! Very practical information there.

I've been writing for years and published in lots of newspapers but I have to admit that I have never tried AC. Maybe I should try it!